Song: ‘Like you said on the Valentine’

Ok, this simpleton mebbe ate too much grade-school candy-heart printed-message (USDA Dye #104) expressions of Love, and
without a helmet.


Long-term damage: at age 45, his doomed emotional grasp still included fantasies written on confectionery-sugar in the ’50s
Still, if you are choosing a ‘hero’ in the psycho-drama, your heart goes out to the ‘fairy-tailed’ fellow, who, to his
credit, stead-fastly upholds his part in the deal: once you give an “I’m Yours” to a chick, it’s, like …4-evah.
The ‘Angel’ little stone mentioned here, found on the beach and lovingly inked ‘I’m yours’, was luckily written in non-
colour-fast script. Such that, after having been dumbly run through a laundry cycle and found by interested-parties, its
inscription was by then illegible. Details, not needed for enjoyment of the tune…


Lyrics:

You’ll say ‘It’s Over’
And I’ll say ‘I’m yours, and you’ll always B mine!’
Just like you wrote on the Valentine

My Guardian Angel
I kiss your hand; take your little stone
And walk out that door.. to the cold unknown

Stand in the corner;
Turn out the lights and I hope to die
Just like I said when we kissed goodbye

-Instru-
Let’s talk this over
Roll down that hill, just another day
We’ll sleep on the beach, at the hideaway
You say it’s over?
I say ‘I’m yours, and you’ll always B Mine’
Just like you wrote on the Valentine

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9 thoughts on “Song: ‘Like you said on the Valentine’

  1. promisesunshine

    Must be a reason there are so many songs about love. It’s a battlefield, a many-splendored thing, a rock. It bites, hurts. It’s tainted. It will go on. It’s lost. This candy heart ditty is destined to end up in a Google search of songs about love.
    Am I imagining that the ends of the lines go a step below what the lady in the back row expected? See. I’m trying to say intelligent things about the song techniques.

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    1. solberg73 Post author

      The chords are indeed complex, a mirror of life. And you are correct; the final line does descend below expected ‘sea-level’
      Now who is this ‘lady in the back row’? And should I send her a candy heart?

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  2. somewittyhandle

    Powerful song. It rakes up the times when (I suppose almost inevitable in any life), the word ‘always’ is abruptly re-defined. A painful reset. You think when you find love, it’s the coda, the cadence resolving to the root chord. Turns out to be just one consonant in a descending cycle of fifths (ascending in fourths?). Even then, for a while you think the Odyssey might lead you back, 12 heroic labours later, to the original key, where you belong.

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    1. solberg73 Post author

      Your take is truly (and typically) ‘straight to the heart’. Does me mini-bliss to read it.
      Tactically, I’ve written tunes with a recurring upwards-minor-3rd modulation, principally because after only five verses I’m back in the arms of my Penelope, she with that knitted ‘thing’ I cried when I received… but coyly avoid being seen in public wearing.
      Oy, so ‘off-topic’ and after only two sentences?
      The hypothetical woman in question here is what we professionals call, in the argot of the trade ‘saccarine-averse’. Unable to exude, let alone, gush, any professions of endearment. I’ve looked for the icon for decades; it’s simply ‘greyed-out. ‘Something inside that was always denied for so many years’…
      Prolly candy hearts; that’d explain it. Economics: The profit/loss stats for trucking ’em from Bucharest out to the sticks of Transylvania in the 50s.
      And where is Debby Levitz, my 3rd-grade heart-throb. ? “I’m yours” on her candy heart: Does she know what that profession implies?!
      Seriously, no song is considered ‘posted’ until I hear from you, and thanks, guy. ♥

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  3. eleanorio

    I don’t think contracts written on candy hearts are binding, thank the Gourd. Very nice tune. I think the musical phenomenon you and Duncan are trying to describe is what we in the know call a “deceptive cadence”: instead of the very satisfying IV, V, I ending, we land on a VI chord. Try it sometime. You’ll love it. It’s gonna be huge.

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